http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/ by Chris Poirier Sat, 22 Nov 2008 09:04:34 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-873 scarletstarlet Wed, 05 Nov 2008 19:37:39 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-873 <p>hey chris, thanks so much for supporting NOISE. your site looks interesting, will definitely be back after the shoot, if we ever manage to come out alive! how did you find us? best wishes.</p> hey chris,
thanks so much for supporting NOISE. your site looks interesting, will definitely be back after the shoot, if we ever manage to come out alive! how did you find us? best wishes.

]]> http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-763 Chris Poirier Mon, 20 Oct 2008 21:31:51 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-763 <p>Yep — credit's in the "This Entry" sidebar.</p> Yep — credit’s in the “This Entry” sidebar.

]]> http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-761 lethe Mon, 20 Oct 2008 21:23:31 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-761 <p>Nice new graphic on the header.  Did you find an illustrator?</p> Nice new graphic on the header.  Did you find an illustrator?

]]> http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-644 lethe Mon, 29 Sep 2008 01:06:05 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-644 <p>I'm beginning your online novel, Chris.  Looking forward to seeing where things go from here . . . </p> I’m beginning your online novel, Chris.  Looking forward to seeing where things go from here . . . 

]]> http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-84 Chris Poirier Tue, 24 Jun 2008 15:18:19 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-84 <p>Hi Sara, Tiergan (as you'll find out he's named) is male.  I don't know how much of either "decent" or "mature" he'll live up to in the coming pages, but I'll leave that up to you to decide.  :-)  It's great to hear from you again!  Thanks for reading.</p> Hi Sara, Tiergan (as you’ll find out he’s named) is male.  I don’t know how much of either “decent” or “mature” he’ll live up to in the coming pages, but I’ll leave that up to you to decide.  :-)  It’s great to hear from you again!  Thanks for reading.

]]> http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-81 Sara Tue, 24 Jun 2008 14:09:38 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-81 <p>I like the strong rhythm in the narration.  Although I'd tone it down a little, I like the sense of jagged distress.  I loved the visual details: the abstract painting which seems to embody the narrator's state of mind and situation.  Undertones of blue.  I'm worried for him.  (presuming it's a guy narrating).  I liked the gleam on the cup handle.  The narrator seems to be fairly decent and fairly mature and I'm interested to see what happens to him.</p> I like the strong rhythm in the narration.  Although I’d tone it down a little, I like the sense of jagged distress.  I loved the visual details: the abstract painting which seems to embody the narrator’s state of mind and situation.  Undertones of blue.  I’m worried for him.  (presuming it’s a guy narrating).  I liked the gleam on the cup handle.  The narrator seems to be fairly decent and fairly mature and I’m interested to see what happens to him.

]]> http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/winter-rain/part-1/#comment-23 Chris Poirier Mon, 02 Jun 2008 18:23:01 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=28#comment-23 <p>Agreed on the "so" — it's been bugging me, too.  As for the other, either usage is valid.  Thanks for the feedback.  :-)</p> Agreed on the “so” — it’s been bugging me, too.  As for the other, either usage is valid.  Thanks for the feedback. 

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